Statement of Intent feedback and Learner Response
1) Read your feedback carefully and then write a summary of it in your own words using WWW / EBI. WWW : The statement of intent meets the brief . EBI: .Concept as robots fighting are not real .Much more representation 2) Do you need to make any changes to your narrative ? Why? Yes as some of does not fit the budget and the time set . 3) How can you improve the use of media terminology in your Statement of Intent? More representation and describing the different types of camera angles that will be used . 4) Representation and stereotyping was a weakness in some drafts. How will you address the key concept of representation in your next draft? I would write about teenage boy stereotypes and robots stereotypes of them being evil being subverted . 5) Finally, think about audience . Why would the target audience (teenagers and young adults) enjoy your TV drama concept? They could relate with the characters and it is a similiar concept to other popular sci-fi dramas