Statement of Intent feedback and Learner Response

 1) Read your feedback carefully and then write a summary of it in your own words using WWW / EBI.

WWW : The statement of intent meets the brief .

EBI:  .Concept as  robots fighting are not real

         .Much more representation 

2) Do you need to make any changes to your narrative? Why?

Yes as some of does not fit the budget and the time set .

3) How can you improve the use of media terminology in your Statement of Intent?

More representation and describing the different types of camera angles that will be used . 

4) Representation and stereotyping was a weakness in some drafts. How will you address the key concept of representation in your next draft?
 I would write about teenage boy stereotypes and robots stereotypes of them being evil being subverted .

5) Finally, think about audience. Why would the target audience (teenagers and young adults) enjoy your TV drama concept?

They could relate with the characters and it is a similiar concept to other popular sci-fi dramas .

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