audience essay learner response

 1) Copy and paste your feedback from the email in full - WWW, EBI and LR.

Audience essay feedback:

WWW:

·        You’ve delivered an 800+ word essay and covered a range of very good points that relate to the question – well done!

·        You’ve picked out some key points from the lessons we did on this topic such as the changes to how audiences can access media products due to the internet.

·        This is a great start in developing our writing for extended essay responses.

 

EBI:

·        You need to work on written English – spelling, punctuation and grammar. As an example, your very first sentence doesn’t actually make sense. At GCSE level, good written English is essential and it’s so important to start well because in an exam the examiner will make a pretty quick judgement on the level you are working at.

·        Think about essay structure and paragraphing. It may have helped your argument to have separate paragraphs for the advantages and disadvantages for audiences for each industry.

LR:

·        Complete the LR tasks on the GCSE Media Year 1 blog – Audience and Industry essay feedback LR.

2) What was the word count for your essay?

809

3) What was your strongest paragraph? Why do you think it was better than others?

The music industry one . I described in detail the changes of the music industry .

4) What was your weakest paragraph? Why do you think it wasn't as good as others?

The TV one .     I did not express enough knowledge about the change in this industry . 

5) How can you improve your extended writing in GCSE Media Studies in future?

Write in more knowledge and research more about every industry you are writing about also don't just stop early .

6) Write ONE thing you have learned about the internet, audience and industry from completing this essay.

The internet causes lots of change in prices of things from the past including lots of companies becoming free . The enternaiment industry has became way bigger for audiences as it is mostly free and have more stuff to been viewed . 



EXT

Research one of the three industries (music, film/TV, news) and find statistics and quotes that link to how the audience experience of that industry has changed as a result of the internet. For example, social media has now overtaken TV as the main news source for young people - showing how power is shifting in the news industry away from traditional institutions (full details in this BBC news article). 




















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